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my least favorite entry into the Forgetters series, but that isn't to say it was bad! I still was ultimately glad I read it, and thought it was well done. I think my issue was more with the characters in this one, I just didn't like them and I didn't really understand why they did anything they did.... it made their actions ultimately feel pointless and slightly uninteresting. I also thought the bit where Osin was sick and then not sick and hurt then not hurt was a little confusing like... is he ok? I think the author's intention was to make it seem like he didn't want concern and complaints, but I was also literally unsure if he was alright. Anyway, the writing was still very snappy throughout and especially towards the beginning of the short story. I would definitely read more of this plot!
my least favorite entry into the Forgetters series, but that isn't to say it was bad! I still was ultimately glad I read it, and thought it was well done. I think my issue was more with the characters in this one, I just didn't like them and I didn't really understand why they did anything they did.... it made their actions ultimately feel pointless and slightly uninteresting. I also thought the bit where Osin was sick and then not sick and hurt then not hurt was a little confusing like... is he ok? I think the author's intention was to make it seem like he didn't want concern and complaints, but I was also literally unsure if he was alright. Anyway, the writing was still very snappy throughout and especially towards the beginning of the short story. I would definitely read more of this plot!