Lianna
This was a really fun book with such a unique concept, though it was definitely cringey at times. Most of the cringe happens at the begining, though, and most of it does contribute to the story and character development later on, so it's not something that I think the book would be better off without. Speak of character development, I really enjoyed how detailed and complex the characters were. I really feel like the characters were real people with all of their dreams, quirks, hobbies, preferences, etc. one minor thing that I wish was different about the story was that three of the chapters ended in the MC orgasming which, by the third chapter, felt a bit lazy. I would have enjoyed it much more if they were placed differently throughout chapters. For instance, I think it would have been fun to have one sex scene where the MC orgasmed in the middle of a chapter and then had to turn around and go do something else. I feel like this would have added some extra dimention to those scenes. But other than that, I really enjoyed the book and would definitely recommend it.
This was a really fun book with such a unique concept, though it was definitely cringey at times. Most of the cringe happens at the begining, though, and most of it does contribute to the story and character development later on, so it's not something that I think the book would be better off without. Speak of character development, I really enjoyed how detailed and complex the characters were. I really feel like the characters were real people with all of their dreams, quirks, hobbies, preferences, etc. one minor thing that I wish was different about the story was that three of the chapters ended in the MC orgasming which, by the third chapter, felt a bit lazy. I would have enjoyed it much more if they were placed differently throughout chapters. For instance, I think it would have been fun to have one sex scene where the MC orgasmed in the middle of a chapter and then had to turn around and go do something else. I feel like this would have added some extra dimention to those scenes. But other than that, I really enjoyed the book and would definitely recommend it.