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I call this a missed opportunity. The first half of the book is brisk and interesting, but the book slumps massively towards the middle and reading it became a chore, bad rhythm, bad writing, lot of repetition. Luckily the story slowly climbs back to be decent and deliver a decent ending, but overall I'm disappointed. It feels like the rewrite wasn't rigorous enough and the book ended up not as tight as it should have been.
The story is cool and I'm 100% on board with the social message. It just felt like I was reading an initial version of the book and not a finished product...
I call this a missed opportunity. The first half of the book is brisk and interesting, but the book slumps massively towards the middle and reading it became a chore, bad rhythm, bad writing, lot of repetition. Luckily the story slowly climbs back to be decent and deliver a decent ending, but overall I'm disappointed. It feels like the rewrite wasn't rigorous enough and the book ended up not as tight as it should have been.
The story is cool and I'm 100% on board with the social message. It just felt like I was reading an initial version of the book and not a finished product...