Véronique
Find some repetitions even I, a non-native English speaker, could avoid. I may understand it in a 1rst edition as a lack of work edition as this book was first autopublished but I did read a 3rd or even later edition.
We do feel the potential, and I will go on with the serie, but I agree with comments about poorly developped characters and too many perfectly happy people. I'll see if it will become better in the next one.
I still have a really good time to read it, I am ambivalent, that's why a 3.5 stars only.
Find some repetitions even I, a non-native English speaker, could avoid. I may understand it in a 1rst edition as a lack of work edition as this book was first autopublished but I did read a 3rd or even later edition.
We do feel the potential, and I will go on with the serie, but I agree with comments about poorly developped characters and too many perfectly happy people. I'll see if it will become better in the next one.
I still have a really good time to read it, I am ambivalent, that's why a 3.5 stars only.