Ely Spencer

Chapter 35. You know what you did.

As a 30 year old woman I can see some plot holes and important questions/reasoning being left unanswered, but I can say if I was a young girl reading this I would have loved it.

Its focus is heavily on the message and lessons the author is trying to teach through the book. It would have been nice to see more depth in the plot and characters.

Nonetheless it's still a good message to get across to young girls and get them on the path to critical thinking.

With more time and attention given to the flow of the book to ensure understanding this truly could have been a 5 star read.

Great and unique writing style. Love the characters. Interesting plot idea. Only issue is I found it very vague and disjointed 50% of the time with me questioning what was going on.

Would have made an excellent novel, but sadly as a novella there was too much to cover in so little time. It came out as barely scratching the surface of a plot and rushing through the story.

Not a book that you should make 14 year olds read in school....