Eduardo Santiago
Cute but soooo clunky. Six short stories, all of them nearly identical: introduction, setup, seemingly-impossible food request, chapter break. Food mystery solved, with extra discoveries to boot! Client weeps tears of joy. Banal closing prayer.
You know how some books you need to read in one or two sittings so you can keep track of all the characters and situations? This is the opposite: I would've found it more effective to read one story, put the book aside for some months, read another, repeat. That way the constant repetition of the same context elements might be less irksome, and the awkward dialogue less grating, you see.
Cute but soooo clunky. Six short stories, all of them nearly identical: introduction, setup, seemingly-impossible food request, chapter break. Food mystery solved, with extra discoveries to boot! Client weeps tears of joy. Banal closing prayer.
You know how some books you need to read in one or two sittings so you can keep track of all the characters and situations? This is the opposite: I would've found it more effective to read one story, put the book aside for some months, read another, repeat. That way the constant repetition of the same context elements might be less irksome, and the awkward dialogue less grating, you see.