Devils
Even though i did enjoy this book as much as the first one, this felt like a Naruto filler episode for me most of the time until like the very last part where all hell broke loose.
It was fun reading about how the twins got their revenge from each heir but I really feel like this could have been a novella. There was no need for this to drag out the entire book until the end.
All the little lore we got sprinkled during these revenge plans could have just been straight to the point. The best way I can describe this books's pace is y=x². You start off from the cliffhanger left from the previous book and then it just keeps going downhill in terms of plot and things happening. Then it starts to pick up again at the very end and end on another cliffhanger. You could just read the beginning and the end and call it a day.
So far i see a trend of 1 spicy chapter of Tory x Caleb per book and they still don't make sense to me apart from it being fan service.
I would highly recommend listening to the first 2 books in this series as graphic audio because that's the only way I found myself actually being immersed and starting to care/bond with the characters. The action and lore finally seem to have picked up at the end and I hope that this momentum will be carried throughout the 3rd book.
Even though i did enjoy this book as much as the first one, this felt like a Naruto filler episode for me most of the time until like the very last part where all hell broke loose.
It was fun reading about how the twins got their revenge from each heir but I really feel like this could have been a novella. There was no need for this to drag out the entire book until the end.
All the little lore we got sprinkled during these revenge plans could have just been straight to the point. The best way I can describe this books's pace is y=x². You start off from the cliffhanger left from the previous book and then it just keeps going downhill in terms of plot and things happening. Then it starts to pick up again at the very end and end on another cliffhanger. You could just read the beginning and the end and call it a day.
So far i see a trend of 1 spicy chapter of Tory x Caleb per book and they still don't make sense to me apart from it being fan service.
I would highly recommend listening to the first 2 books in this series as graphic audio because that's the only way I found myself actually being immersed and starting to care/bond with the characters. The action and lore finally seem to have picked up at the end and I hope that this momentum will be carried throughout the 3rd book.