Enjoyable but
I enjoyed the book though the MC repeatedly kept going on about because he played baseball. Of course like almost all litrpg books a war is coming which feels unnecessary. The story and world was interesting enough without that. I worry it will go away from what made it enjoyable and become standard fare.
Lost interest along the way
The story was interesting, but in the end I found myself not caring about the main plotline that came to pass. The writing was fine with only minimal mistakes usually in the form of missing words. I was not a big fan of the time skips though. The initial skips make sense since the story focuses on what happens after, but in some ways the chapters each felt like their own contained stories due to the later skips. It almost feels like too much crammed into one book since the world and content never gets a chance to breathe and instead the story starts to feel like summaries of the events.
I don't know that I will read a sequel.