Wish Upon the Stars 3
Wish Upon the Stars 3
Ratings3
Average rating3.3
Did Not Finish
Finally stopped around 40%. I like the story! The characters are kinda interesting! But the writing quality is just constant paper cuts. The biggest problem, far and away, is how frequently it violates “show don't tell.” So much of the writing is the MC asking another character a question about what happened out of scene and then then rattling off a ton of exposition. It was alright for a while, but it's finally just too much for me — keeps pulling me out of the story.