What Is Happening in Egypt, Texas?

The premise of the book and general plot line are the only reason this ended up being a 2 and not a 1 star. SO much more editing needs to be done on this because there are multiple spelling issues, missing words, and punctuation issues (not even just missing but bad spacing or chopping up of words with the punctuation). One of the characters also has a name error (flips to a different one and back). Repetition becomes an issue, bloating the page count.

Written from multiple perspectives, the same line can crop up over and over with maybe a word or two of variation. Though it makes sense to have the same scene happen sometimes from those different points of view, the continuity of where things have happened or placement of things and people within the scene arbitrarily change for no reason. For example, people inside a vehicle in one chapter where they never got into the vehicle in the very next chapter from another character's perspective of the same scene.