What If We Were

4.5 for me
There were little lags, and then something awesome, endearing, and/or funny would happen.
Loved the friendship between Nat & Marie, the inclusion of Jane and to a lesser extent Sam.
I enjoyed the letters to Santa.

The fairy tale portion felt like it went on a little long, but I was still interested in what would happen next and how it would turn from convention.

Thanks Axelle, let's see what else hoopla has of your work.