Wake Up and Open Your Eyes

The premise for this novel really amused me, even if it's a little on the nose. Unfortunately, I did not enjoy actually reading it, and did not enjoy the style of chaotically inserting inner monologue every other sentence. But what really tipped it into 1 star for me was the halfway point when the author switches from 3rd to 2nd person. To be clear, the POV is unambigously a character in the story and not trying to be any kind of reader insert, but the narrative is now entirely 2nd person present tense.