Things Have Gotten Worse Since We Last Spoke

Wow! This was just bad at every level. Not even entertaining. I pushed through because it's short and everyone was gushing about how fucked up the ending was. And it was just nothing? Also I don't know the author etc but I find it hard to not see the homophobic connotations of a lesbian obsessed of having a child to the point of doing atrocities.

The dialogue was extremely unnatural, so was the relationship progression, I know I know it's not a normal relationship plus it's basically a short story but as is it just feels like a - “wouldn't it be fucked up if that happened”. Have read 2 sentence horror stories with more substance. Boring.