They Both Die at the End

There are a few things working against the story, first it happens in 24h which makes a slow burn kind of love story development impossible. Second, it's in first person, with the author trying to imitate teen speech(“it was mad real yo”), not a fan, and this style of having the characters speak to us as if breaking the 4th wall continuously, also brings me out of the story. Finally, the message of the story was too on the nose and i don't even agree with the message. All in all it's a meh from me.