The Spanish Love Deception
2021 • 448 pages

Ratings274

Average rating3.6

15

This was a cute story, but the writing was... not great. Not like 50 Shades level bad, but enough that it really irritated me. Things like “decisions he had taken”. You don't take decisions, you MAKE decisions. Or at one point when the two leads are snuggled up together, the main character says “a grunt fell into my neck”. What? And at least three times when the love interest moved towards her suddenly, she says “he ate the distance between us”. Wtf?? Add to that a load of grammatical errors (like using “it's” when it should have been “is”) and the result is 2/5 stars from me. It would have been 3 if the writing had matched the story. So disappointing.

Although I do have to add that the sex scenes were awkward AF and really weird and sudden.

January 24, 2022