Ratings2
Average rating2.5
There was too much wrong with this story for me to give it any more than one star. The biggest problem that I absolutely could not overlook is the terrible writing. I was too focused on my own pain to care about Aaron's suffering. Lack of commas and incorrect words and phrases were only the most obvious problems.
Vincent and his guards' behavior didn't make sense, and the story didn't grip me emotionally like I know it was intended to do. I can't bring myself to care enough to buy the next installment. I'm going to give Flesh Cartel a try instead.