The Golden Enclaves

CAWPILE SCORE
C-9
A-9
W-8
P-8
I-8
L-9
E-9
TOTAL-8.57/10

CAWPILECharactersEl- nice shifting of priorities, changes of goals. Orion. Immortal because he's a MAWMouth. Depressed. Given in to the hunger. Liesel Like her efficiency, don't really like her.Ophelia- Evil with a purposeAtmosphereThe very emotional scenes stick out. And we have a nice vision of what it feels like to be thre.WritingBeautiful writing. Elegently connected with the first story. I like that it starts and almost ends with “ I have to Kill Orion Lake”PlotThe Prophecy was half fake. Enclave's still being destroyed, El tries to get orion out, but can't at first. Kills some mawmouths then gets orion out of Ghost Scholomance. Rebuild a couple enclave's because Enclave's are built on Mawmouth's or Pure Mana Victims. War. Have to kill orion/ save orion using Golden Sutras. Adapt sutras for all.InvestmentRead this book in 2 50% chunks, just didn't want to put it down.LogicOpen PaymentsEnclaves built on maw mouths. The way it works makes sense. The prophecy EnjoymentVery minor sex scene felt excess to me. Especially gay I didn't feel anything from her towards that.You're dead. You're already deadMiscMaw Mouths are the basis of enclave's. makes sense the void is always hungry, mawmouths are always hungry
I will be talking about it on Libromancy https://libromancy.podbean.com/ on 10/03/2023