Ratings1,039
Average rating4.3
Overall the story was fine. However I really don't like unexplained time jumps that are ambiguous to the time frame of the jump. They distract my brain in a way that restricts my ability to enjoy the story.
In this case it was worse because it quickly be came clear it was a set up for a “twist” which I guess would have been fine except that the chapter that reveals the big twist dump so many other big reveals that it destroyed any impact of what was intended to be the big twist.
Like I said though the story was good, it just would have been better if told linearly.