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The Dino Rancher's Winter Bride

The Dino Rancher's Winter Bride

F/F Paranormal Western Short Story

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15

I really couldn't say no to that title, and the story delivered exactly what the title promised. It's very short, but it does a fairly good job of developing the two main characters.

There is no real establishment of the setting. It does feel like the Old West, but the dinosaur rancher could be a rancher or farmer of any kind. I have no idea why dinosaurs still exist in this world or why it's okay for two women to marry each other - is it acceptable everywhere, or only because of these women's specific circumstances?

Well, I know there is no reason to take this story super seriously. It's a nice little diversion, nothing too memorable, but definitely not terrible, and the sex scene was sweet. The author really needs to hire a proofreader, though. There were several slips into the wrong tense and a lot of other minor mistakes of that kind.

July 11, 2017