The Beyond

Originally posted at FanLit http://www.fantasyliterature.com/reviews/the-beyond/

The Beyond is the last book in Jeffrey Ford???s WELL-BUILT CITY trilogy. This bizarre story began with The Physiognomy in which Cley, an arrogant and cruel physiognomist, is sent by the evil ruler Drachton Below on a mission to the mining town of Anamasobia. While there, Cley makes a bad decision which destroys the beautiful face of Arla, the woman he has fallen in love with. This humbles and devastates Cley (drastically changing his personality for the better) and leads to the destruction of Drachton Below???s Well-Built City.

In the second book, Memoranda, we find Cley in a new life ??? acting as herbalist and midwife in the village of Wenau. When Drachton Below, still living in the ruins of his Well-Built City, poisons the people of Wenau, Cley is the only person who can help, but he has to go into Below???s warped mind to find the antidote. He gets some help from Misrik, Below???s charming demon son.

In The Beyond, guilt-ridden Cley is compelled to seek forgiveness and redemption by searching for Arla, the woman whose face he ruined. To do this, he must traverse the mysterious Beyond, the huge cold wasteland that lies north of the Well-Built City. At first he sets out with Misrix and Wood, his old dog, but the northern wastes are teeming with demons and Misrix, a tame and well-educated demon, must turn back as he feels himself losing the civility and culture he???s learned. Cley and Wood go on without him while Misrix returns to the Well-Built City and uses a hallucinogen to watch their progress. Cley meets a few people and some strange creatures in the Beyond, learns that the Beyond is conscious and has plans for him, and then something weird and profound happens to Cley at the end.

Most of the plot of The Beyond consists of Misrix recounting Cley???s journey, but Misrix has his own subplot, too. He???s been alone and lonely in the decay of the Well-Built City because the people in the few surrounding villages think he and the city are evil. But when Misrix saves the life of a little girl, he makes a friend. This relationship brings him much joy and much pain.

Up to this point, Ford???s WELL-BUILT CITY trilogy has been inventive, exciting, and surreal. There???s so much to like: the pseudoscience of physiognomy, mechanical monsters, revived corpses, polite soul-sucking creatures, an academically-minded demon, a city built to be a memory palace, hallucinogenic drugs, thought-provoking ideas and plenty of symbolism and humor. I was hoping for more of the same creativity and bizarreness in The Beyond.
While I enjoyed the story, The Beyond didn???t quite meet my expectations. Much of the plot involves the mundane aspects of Cley???s journey ??? acquiring food and shelter, being cold, waiting for snow to thaw, etc, and these parts were sometimes dull. When Cley???s story finally gets going, much of it is so surreal that it???s hard to become engaged. There may have been some connections and symbolism that I missed, but, frankly, I just wasn???t engrossed enough to meditate on it. Misrix???s story, on the other hand, has more impact because it???s lucid, suspenseful and emotional, but it???s definitely the minor plot.

I love Jeffrey Ford???s style and imagination, and the audio version of The Beyond that I listened to was beautifully read by Christian Rummel. The Beyond wasn???t as good as its predecessors, but it was still worth my time.

Terrible that the end of the trilogy has to be so poor. Luckily, all the books existed largely independent of one another, so the impact is minimal. The problem was that the prose seemed to have changed. Where before the book used the voice of Cley, now Misrix was writing. His character is well read enough to have been clear, but Ford was probably unable to use the different style.
In addition, there was a lot of wasted white space on each page. The whole thing was off, taking way too long to start the interesting part of the book. Nevertheless, besides the boring adventure, the high-level plot seemed reasonable. Will still read Ford: 2/3 isn't bad.