That Time I Got Drunk and Saved a Demon

This was a fun adventurous book, and I did not like it.  

The overall action is fun, and the book never takes itself too seriously. My issue is the writing. I am not the best with grammar, but this author did not even run a basic spellcheck or edit. This felt like someone’s first book on Wattpad. The story felt rushed. We go from one situation to the next and there isn’t much rest periods. This stops the books from being a cozy fantasy.  

The main character’s point of view was difficult to read as it went on for too long at times. The dialogue was another part of the book that was terrible. Conversations were all over the place and a little cringy at times. The author uses a lot of modern slang that takes you out of the fantasy setting.  

The idea was good but with such bad writing, I could not get into this book. This says a lot when I am an avid Wattpad reader. This could be better with editing.