Ratings534
Average rating3.8
Cleaver premise but honestly, I found the execution to be pretty average. Some parts are difficult to read with every tiny piece of dialogue ending with “person said”, “person replied, “person said”. It was very off-putting endlessly seeing this filler, I'd expect it from an amateur but someone who's allegedly an experienced writer with a proper editor? What were they thinking?
I'm also not sure why the last sections (Codas) of the book existed, they really served no value at all and should have been edited out.