Plain Bad Heroines

the concept itself is 5 stars but man. the execution was not ideal. the book is definitely too long and dwells on unnecessary scenes.

i didnt mind the narrator but i also feel like your good old 3rd person point of view narrator would have been fine for this

i especially feel like there could have been a lot cut from the beginning of the book because it really takes a while to properly get going... if it ever actually gets going at all, which is kind of debatable. i am also not sure if it is supposed to be scary or creepy or smth, but the pacing certainly didnt build up any tension or suspense at all

any reveals towards the end of the book didnt even surprise me, they just made me go “okay...”

idk, i think this book could have been much better with a different structure (or as a different medium...)