Persephone

As far as a story goes, it's fine. However as a short story I think it could do better. The ending is something, unlike the first short story in this collection but still there wasn't really any feeling in it. It felt like all build-up and rushed ending. 

This was more exciting than the first story in this collection that I read, but didn't really feel like a complete story.

1 star baaaad

Uhhhh.... Pretty generic and the only thing new or different was the ending. Almost turned into a generic YA novel about factions or magic school but thank God we ran out of pages before that possibility could be considered.

I don't even wanna talk about it.