Part of Your World

God, I tried SO hard. The prose was decent, but the characterization felt flat– and if you are going to make Ariel use sign language maybe keep that plot point around. And plot was just... Why is Ursula doing Any Of That? At least give her some personality beside flat villainy. “I want to send this country to war” OKAY WHY. Give My Girl some decent motivation or S O ME TH I N G.Honestly, the entire time, I was just wishing I was rereading [b:The Mermaid's Daughter 30531543 The Mermaid's Daughter Ann Claycomb https://images.gr-assets.com/books/1484016287s/30531543.jpg 51057146]