Kiss & Tell

The problem here is one of pacing.

It's a delicate balance, to be sure, when you're writing a book about a blossoming romance between teenagers: the difference between why-haven't-they-kissed-yet and whoa-there-hold-your-horses. Especially in something as constrained in form as a young adult romance, there are only so many plots. This is not a unique problem.

I can admire the decision to dive headlong into things right out of the gate; that's not the problem. What happens after, though, is... not much. Which is, frankly, inexplicable. They never get to have the space to just be together, nor is there enough happening outside of that to move their characters along any sort of arc. Both leads do eventually get put in their place, but it never gels together in a thematic whole.

Which is a shame, because there's a lot to like in the book. The characters' love for music shines through everything, first and foremost. You could consider the music a character in its own right, if you were so inclined. Even the secondary cast gets time to shine (I especially love the ex-boyfriend, who is straight up a disaster).

But by giving so much time to that expanded cast (and there are a lot of characters) we don't get a chance to properly invest ourselves in the leads. What about them works? Why are they together, really, if not as a rebound and a publicity stunt? And the answers proffered are unsatisfactory, the ending unearned. It is a sweet story, though, if ultimately hollow – a piece of candy you think is filled, but when you bite down there's just air inside. There's that lingering disappointment that it could have been just that much more than it is.