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Falcon: Three years ago I arrived at the scene of an art heist to find Kingston Wilde tied to a radiator, claiming to be an innocent bystander in the wrong place at the wrong time. It was only later I learned he was actually the elusive art thief I'd been tracking for years. And I was the one who'd let him sweet-talk his way out of my grasp. Ever since, I've made it my mission to get my hands on him again, and this time I don't plan on letting go. Unfortunately, fate has other plans. A priceless artifact has gone missing, and King is the only one who can help recover it. I thought nothing could be worse than being forced to work with the egotistical SOB, but I was wrong. Falling for the charming art thief in the middle of an operation is way, way worse. King: The key to being a good art thief is knowing when to call it quits. After one close call too many, I decide that time is now and head home to Hobie, Texas, intending to hang up my lock picks for good. Unfortunately, the FBI has other plans. Agent Dirk Falcon approaches me with an offer I can't refuse: full immunity for my past crimes in exchange for helping him with one last job. The catch? The job involves stealing from the very man who taught me everything I know. The same man who double-crossed me years ago. Pulling this off means trusting Falcon and his team, but how do I trust the sexy agent when he's staked his career on taking me down?
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9 primary books11 released booksForever Wilde is a 11-book series with 9 released primary works first released in 2017 with contributions by Lucy Lennox.
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Story itself is fun and I liked the dynamic between the two main characters.
HOWEVER.
Both Lucy Lennox and Michael Dean failed to put in the bare minimum effort to write and pronounce the foreign words and names used during the story correctly. As a native Hungarian speaker I found it frankly offensive how much Dean — a professional audiobook narrator — didn't even try to look up how to pronounce not only the Hungarian, but the French words too. I do not judge people for having an accent or struggling with a sound they didn't have a lifetime to get used to; put he didn't even bother to google the alphabet and figure out basic pronunciation rules. I googled the words and names he fumbled and it took me a minute each to find a site that provides recordings of native speakers.
My issue isn't only with how disrespectful this is towards both cultures; these mistakes also break the immersion completely. Both Falcon and King used to live in France, and King is a notorious art thief, so there's no fxcking way this guy didn't put an ungodly amount of work into sounding as close to native as possible (which we know he does because that's literally how he cons Falcon into releasing him in the first scene).
Not only that, but you mean to tell me that King — a supposed master of blending in — dated Elek Kemény [ˈɛlɛk ˈkɛmeːɲ] FOR TWO WHOLE YEARS and he speaks his native language that poorly?! Yeah, not buying it, completely threw me off.
I also have no idea how Lennox managed to fumble King's nickname during the translation process. You see King's criminal name is Le Chaton (which Dean btw pronounced La Chaton every single time) meaning kitten in French. The (supposed) Hungarian translation of this is also what Elek uses as a term of endearment for King.
Now I have no idea by what Lennox's process was here but she somehow arrived at macska [ˈmɒt͡ʃkɒ] (which Dean pronounced [ˈmɒʃkɒ] while narrating the native speaker, lmao) which just means cat. So somehow she found the French word for kitten, but not Hungarian. I have no idea how one manages that. Once again, just to make sure the information truly is easily accessible I googled “kitten in Hungarian”, and Google Translate itself immediately gave me cica [ˈt͡sit͡sɒ], the correct translation AND the only one we use as a term of endearment. No one calls their partner cat in English either, so this was especially perplexing to me, lol.
Conclusion: don't be sloppy when incorporating foreign cultures and their languages into your story, because it's disrespectful and embarassing.