Heir of Blood and Moonlight

Great book; could use some general editing

The story completely pulled me in. It's been a while since a book had me wanting to give my kids all access to the pantry and tech just so I could sit and read all day.

The book did have some editing issues. There were duplicate words, areas where the author probably started one way and moved another without removing the initial thought. There was one line I wasn't even quite sure what she was saying. It could get a little distracting.

That said, I can't wait to see what book 2 brings!!