Fall of Ruin and Wrath

I had a couple of problems with this story. First, I get that the character's knew each other a long time ago. I get that they were in love. What I don't get is the love. Maybe there should have bee flashbacks to when they were just first a budding love. Better character development would have helped to. These character's are obsessively focused on each other, it got annoying rather quick, but you would think with as much focus as there is on the relationship, I would understand how they a good for each other. TOO MUCH ANGST!

This could also use some editing. Parts need shortened, others need a more in depth explanation. The dialog has moments where the author really shines, other times it seemed to really sway from what I had how the characters had responded and acting during previous parts of the book.

In a nutshell: MEH! Needs work, but has potential.

I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.