By Her Sight

It was a good read, but there were no real stakes or tension. The story just flowed along and was often predictable.

My biggest issue is the healing of her blindness. Why was it necessary for her to regain her sight? We spend 260 pages with her as a blind character, experiencing and navigating the world through her other senses.

She could have been such a badass—like a ninja-style dervish—defeating her enemies despite her disability.

Another issue I had was with the portrayal of the FMC's personality. She's described as “sweet,” but in reality, she's just polite and well-mannered. Due to her sheltered upbringing, she hasn't learned how to stand up for herself or defend herself.

That said, I appreciated the slow-burn romance. It would have been difficult to connect with a childlike, insecure FMC being paired with three mates in a rushed romance.

I'm also glad the males aren't the typical alphaholes. The dynamic worked well, especially because Holly acts as a shield for the FMC, managing the tension between her and the triad.