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Overall, this story feels rushed. Lucian calls Dahlia his “treasure” before he even meets her for the first time. And the time jumps really bothered me while reading, like the authors were just trying to skate over all the relationship building, so it felt like them falling in love within a month was unrealistic. It felt like a lot of details were missing. This book definitely could've been twice as long.
The character's personalities didn't make me care much about them either. Dahlia is insecure as hell, which, given her history is understandable, but it doesn't even seem like she grows up at all. Lucian is just dumb. A clueless man who can't read the signs his woman is sending.
A petty gripe I had: Dahlia's nickname “Dah” is stupid.
The story felt unfinished as well. While Dahlia may have gotten over her biggest issue, Lucian didn't. Nothing was resolved with his ex or his family problems.
Not sure if I will continue this series.