Bellman & Black

Loved this story till I didn't. I never figured out what the “deal” was so I was ultimately not satisfied. The voice was sometimes fantastic but the final few pages left me deflated.

There was potential. Interesting atmosphere, nice writing. Then it went on, in detail, about the running of a mill. Then, an emporium. It went on, and on, and on.

They set up mysterious details. Some interesting bits to keep me wanting to read. But then it followed through on none of them, and when it did, it was an underwhelming yawn-fest.

If you want to read about a boring over-worked man running a company, this is the book for you. (though I admittedly question your taste a little)

I wish I could think out and organize details the way the main character does, however I'm glad I'm not this obsessive. I like the rhythm and flow of the sentences, but the plot is drawn out waaay too long!