Amorphous
2025

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15

DNF @ 15%

This book reads more like a rough draft. It's riddled with errors that any standard word processing program would have flagged. Here are a few examples:

“And up five flights of stepped I go.”
“Don't you ever if your life touch me again.”
“Your master's work has more emphasis on research then actual field study.”

I like the book cover, and the author does a good job of describing the environment and atmosphere, but they get too bogged down in extraneous details. I don't recall reading any actual thoughts of the main character, which left me feeling disconnected from him. It felt more like reading a description of what's happening in a play or movie rather than reading a book.

I stuck it out as long as I could, but I was too annoyed by the errors and writing style, I felt no connection to the characters, and the plot failed to hook my interest.

May 5, 2025