Ajax's Ascension: The Divine Witness

overall enjoyable

The book was entertaining, but definitely needs another editing pass or two. The story is presented in the first person present tense, but starting with the first chapter doesn't seem to stick to it. The narrative constantly shifts from present to past tense even in the same sentence though this settles somewhat as the book goes on, and later in the book even shifts from first to third person in the same sentence. This at times leads to some confusion about who or what is actually being mentioned.

I will definitely give a sequel a try.