A Touch of Darkness

4.59 am: im...upset - this story had so much potential and yet it fell short of expectation / did not entirely?deliver? and like the premise was rly interesting, i'd really wanted to like it :(

the writing could have been better - there were typos/errors all over the place ...¿

it was like a train wreck just waiting to happen, and at times, such a cringefest i had to stop reading

simulataneously - it held my attention enough to want to know how it ends....
i feel like the ideas and concepts were there, just.... not developed well? or, rather - there're better ways to sort out the conflict in plot, etc.
also, the pacing was kinda off?

oh! and the instalove was a huge .... “urgh, why?!” :/

would've liked more nuance in the story telling

persephone (24) actually turned out to be... well, i'll just say i was v e r y disappointed and only continued because i'd already gotten too far into the story to avert my eyes from this “trainwreck”. even hades was very cringey at times ... im so over the mortal/immortal trope hmph :

the only redeeming character: Hermes LOL