Hannah G
1. A heroine who suffers from Too Stupid To Live syndrome, from not wanting to let anyone help her to driving her car into a waist deep river crossing (but somehow the guy’s pickup truck makes it across??)
2. A hero who recklessly mixes up known dangerous personal business with a woman already in the run
3. A story line that contradicts itself
Since this is a known reliable author, I’m going with “crammed on a deadline and skipped the editor” on this one.
1. A heroine who suffers from Too Stupid To Live syndrome, from not wanting to let anyone help her to driving her car into a waist deep river crossing (but somehow the guy’s pickup truck makes it across??)
2. A hero who recklessly mixes up known dangerous personal business with a woman already in the run
3. A story line that contradicts itself
Since this is a known reliable author, I’m going with “crammed on a deadline and skipped the editor” on this one.