Jetrois
The world building was not enough. The book is dull, lifeless, no panache.
The world building was not enough. The book is dull, lifeless, no panache.
The world building was not enough. The book is dull, lifeless, no panache.
The world building was not enough. The book is dull, lifeless, no panache.
I found this story difficult to engage with due to its noticeable gaps and underdeveloped world-building. The narrative lacks the depth and clarity needed to fully draw readers into its universe, leaving much to be desired in terms of immersion and coherence. Despite its promising premise, the story requires significant refinement to meet its potential.
I found this story difficult to engage with due to its noticeable gaps and underdeveloped world-building. The narrative lacks the depth and clarity needed to fully draw readers into its universe, leaving much to be desired in terms of immersion and coherence. Despite its promising premise, the story requires significant refinement to meet its potential.
good world building and plot however up till the middle of this book it took a turn for the repetitive
good world building and plot however up till the middle of this book it took a turn for the repetitive