The lack of quotation marks and dialogue indicators was jarring and a distraction at first (so much re-reading) and something I learned to work around (less rereading...but I was still re-reading). It was distracting enough that if this had been a longer story I would have bailed within the first 75 pages, and that would have been unfortunate - because ultimately I really liked the story. I did not find the shifting points of view too distracting. And...I really shouldn't have to be discussing the structure of the story telling this much...
So - short book...long read, but ultimately I liked it. I enjoyed the dry humor and descriptions.
I found some of this is amusing...but I quickly grew weary of reading about Ryan Dean's obsession with his nether regions and the rest of toxic masculinity at Pine Whatzit boarding school. Female characters are either ‘hot' or ‘not hot' and offer little more in regards to character development. I did a fair amount of eye rolling after the initial charm started to wear thin. And the penultimate crisis is yet another tired bury-your-gay trope.