Second person isn't my favourite narrative voice and I am afraid it kept me from fully appreciating the story.

2.5
I dislike this Louis too much to round it up.
It's not badly written, it just drove me up the wall.

Quiet and beautiful.

4.5, will up on rereading

Played me just right, I'm a fan always and forever. Lots of mutual pining. It's absolutely delicious.

The drama is strong with this story. :/

I don't usually read kidfic, but when I do I love it two times out of three.

Can a story be boring and angsty at the same time? Yes, it can.

I've read reviews longer than this was. I don't mind reading one-shots but what are they doing on GR?

The epilogue was a bit too romance-movie type but it was done on purpose so it made me laugh.

He finds Derek sexually attractive, duh. He also finds water to be wet.

Final verdict: I'm 99% sure it's the same premise, different story.

Such a short story but it packed a serious punch.

4.5