Catalina
I enjoyed Bird Box a lot more. this one was soooo slow paced. it got so much better near the end
We need an extra chapter of Maude figuring out her ankle bracelet and draining the bank account and all that.. That part felt rushed, that's why the 4 stars... It could've been so good. Also wtf happened to the waitress? So much left unknown.
I'm sorry but this isn't writing. The poetry was extremely bad, so many misspellings, punctuation missing everywhere and sooo much repetition. Maybe this would've been better as a novella because the story is interesting. No wonder I'm the first reviewer since this “book” came out a year ago.
literally nothing happens 80% of the book. too many repetitions like... it's extreme. too many useless details of the bugs and random thoughts. not a fan of the MC or the writing tbh.
not my cup of tea. I get why she never published it herself lul. + one star because the ending got interesting. rest was meh. probably not the best book from Jane to start with
not my shit. i'd recommend it to kids tho. i get it why they read this in school. if my teacher would ve gave me this book to read as homework when i was 12 i probably would've liked it. the dialogues were so fucking bad the first like.. 8-9 chapters i wanted to throw it out the window. last chapters were interesting a little but it still doesn't deserve more than one star from me
DNF at 46%
There's like.. almost no plot at all. Many grammatical errors like others have said in the reviews. The sex scenes were good but the story is kinda boring and not much really happens. I tried.
