I really wanted to love this one. I loved the ambiance and even the magic system. The pacing was off and too often I found myself in a lull which made me want to put the book down altogether. I'll probably pick up the next in the series because the overall mood/ambiance/world felt so intriguing but much has to be fleshed out.
For all of those readers that claim this is not a good representation or that they are not familiar with poly but don't think this is a good representation... you clearly have never dipped a toe into the Poly Subreddit. Poly can absolutely look like this. Just say you don't like how messy it was and be done with it. I'm curious enough to see where this series goes because it can go in so many directions and that cliffhanger! Sheesh.